click, click.
with each click, one bird became nothing
in the sky.
my morning was a morning -
it started with breakfast,
a space seen through hotel blinds,
in which there flew too many birds.
so click.
a word we underlined in pencil
and wrote “onomatopoeia” in the margin.
a cheap trick.
i broke the stress relief thing
over my keyboard -
i spent some time vacumming up sawdust
between the “Qwerty”,
“from the French”,
meaning ”A small water creature”,
so small it cannot breathe.
i hummed the only song that
i forgot to put on my ipod,
went to another meeting,
and mourned the loss of a friend.

July 20, 2008 at 9:35 am |
Perfect. Edging toward the concrete but still you magically perfect.
July 21, 2008 at 10:11 pm |
click click click–this one clicks!
it even made me snort a little
August 12, 2008 at 10:20 am |
I like the surrealism here